Original poem:

Somewhere
Someone
is writing a poem.

reflecting her inner most thoughts,
her deepest secret.

the intensity flow through her pen
and her fooot constantly tap away
louder and louder.
Something is troubling her

Pitter patter of her foot,
heavy words muttered under hear breath.

She stops
We all stop.

Time is up.


Nikko, Danica, Chris G:

Somewhere, someone is writing a poem.
In this world he might be alone
Hi house, a plce to think
Needs to finish on the brink.

Something is troubling him.
Inner most thoughts, deepest secret.
He feels, he writes
Word, sound, no frights.

No choice, at his prime
Running out of time.
Somewhere, someone is writing a poem.
Because of that, he'll go show 'em.

He stops.
We stop.

Time is up

POEM EDIT:
I found it difficult when we had to remove articles, pronouns, then entire phrases in order to create imagery and sound. Removing words and while trying to make sense was challenging. At times I thought my poem wouldn't make sense but as I read it over multiple times, removing words did make it more meaningful.

GROUP WORK:
Combining multiple poems together with Chris and Nikko was somewhat easy because all of our poems were similar. It wasn't that hard to compromise all of our ideas together because we all listened to each others opinions.